In the Land Above the Clouds - Comments

  • Kingster

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    dis one's a Master-piece !
    June 4th, 2011 at 12:36pm
  • AmorarEsDeVivir

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    This is sweet, and has a calming vibe to it. =) I could imagine this as a lullaby.

    I did notice one typo: Not "ever" poem has to rhyme, should say every I'm assuming.
    October 15th, 2010 at 06:01am
  • MeowAlexRawr

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    Wow I'm surpized this doesn't have more comments because this is an amazing poem! Very well written.
    July 3rd, 2010 at 02:47pm
  • Dots

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    I'm mad mad mad over this poem! It was perfectly done=D
    June 28th, 2010 at 11:26pm