She Can't Have You...Cause You're My Brother - Comments

To Stranger Danger, this has nothing to do with an actual family member...:shifty

I can't say that I can relate, but it was so wonderfully done. I understand how you don't want your brother paying attention to another family rather than the one who's grown up with him for all of his life. Twas beautiful.

I will always love you Tre.

I love how the lines were short and they brother sister loves was so present.

:arms: forever

The words are amazingly put.
Wicked.

This is beautacious. Er... yes. >_>

Seriously Shannon, that was lyk osm and I wish I could write poems like that.

Excellent job! ^_^

I liked this, a lot. The lines were short, and had rhythm which was awesome. Also, I like how there's a twist in the poem, how it's love "In a brother-sister way", because naturally at first the reader believes that it's in a romantic way.
I was also interested by the lack of punctuation, I think it's good in here because it lets the emotions speak more clearly.
Good job! (:

Wow, that's one incredible poem, you are majorly talented!

That's such a wonderful poem, Shannon. = )
I'm jelous of how talented you are. = ]

My friend used to feel exactly the same way.
Wonderful poem, by the way.

Oh my god shannon. That is one of the most beautiful things I have ever read.
I'm so jealous of your talent...

I still love you <3

That's amazing Shan.

:hug:

I love it.

Wow, that is really good.

I wish I could write poems. I suck at them.