Am I Your Winona? - Comments

This is amazing, for some reason as I read it, I could hear it being sung in my head like a song? (: You are a really talented writer

I really liked this.
It flowed really well and I really liked the end.
Good job (:

I feel the same way all the time. I think sometimes we all wonder if we ever really matter to someone who matters to us. I liked this poem a lot. :) <3

Wtf is a Winona?

Haha. Great job. Great charm and sense to it. It flows real nicely too, and the "whistle" and "snap" just...wow. The sounds were there, you know?

Deep shit. Good job.

I love the emotions you display in this! It's simply brilliant!! It is very well written too!

I'm not much of a poem-reader, but I really liked it. It wasn't really really filled with imagery, but it had enough that I could see something in my head, not to mention it flowed well. Good job!

I love how this gets progressively angrier. :D But even from the person's anger, there's that unsureness "[i]am I your Winona?[/i]". Love it. :)

I like this poem a lot, it's unique. One of those rare awesome ones. You can really write. (:

This was really sweet.
It was so...deep.
I can't think of a better word.
But seriously, it was beautiful

I guess I don't understand the reference, so I'm probably not getting the message out of this. HOWEVER. It's very well written, and the flow is great. It's very natural feeling, and there's a lot of emotion.

I'm not a poetry person, but this is beatuiful. I like the flow - it feels very natural, where as when I try to write poetry, it's incredibly forced.
Nice job. :)

I'm not really a poet and not really a reader of poetry, but this was really lovely (:

I thought it was magnificent :3 Along with [b]Acid Milk[/b], I don't know much about poetry but I think this is, to say the least, A-grade work.

It has that nice Ivy charm.
I can see some FOB in it :D
And yes, you are my Winona.

I don't know much about poetry, but I liked this. :)

I love how it's using the "She's My Winona" without actually being like the song. I love it, especially the end :D

this is good. The flowing was a bit off, but other than that good.

Am I your Winona? >_<

Great job at displaying the emotion and the changes. Th flow was different, but it worked. Its been a while since I've read any poetry, and I loved this. I can relate. :)