Dark Poem - Comments

Oh I was talking to quietchick btw.

I don't mean to be a b*tch, but I am in a b*tchy mood and honestly nobody give a flying f*ck out of h*ll what you think. Nobody cares if you don't like the poem, nobody cares if you are a dark person, nobody cares about you because you are nothing. Your life to me is equal to a piece of gum stuck to the pavement. Oh and again I don't mean to be a b*tch.[=

Not bad, but maybe try using some unusual metaphors to make it more interesting.

wel I called it that cause I was like really upset at the time and it was like a dark time in my day when I made it up...so yea.

I don't mean to be a b*tch but, I'm in a b*tchy mood at the moment. This isn't a dark poem. Title it something like 'Your loss' or something. I love dark poems because I'm a dark person as most people say and I was dissapointed. Again, sorry. I don't mean to be a b*tch. It's not a bad poem.

wow very beautiful and simple. nature does the trick of clearing minds and bringing bliss.