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  • akmaoptea

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    I think this is the best one you've done in terms of imagery
    at least that I've read so far
    However, you should maybe work a little on the flow
    April 6th, 2007 at 03:26pm
  • Legomannj

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    Thank you Lina=)
    February 28th, 2007 at 08:28pm
  • Lykwoah

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    It's awesome=]

    I think it might be about a murder or something, maybe a man who killed his girlfriend...
    =]
    February 28th, 2007 at 08:24pm
  • Dilt

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    I like it=)
    Maybe it should be a little less complicated to understand what's the 'message' in it though=)
    February 28th, 2007 at 04:12pm
  • Legomannj

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    [quote="Mrs_kickass_Greenday"]wow this is really awesome![/quote]

    Thank you :)
    February 27th, 2007 at 10:49pm
  • JessiKAT

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    wow this is really awesome!
    February 27th, 2007 at 09:51pm
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