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akmaoptea
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I think this is the best one you've done in terms of imagery
at least that I've read so far
However, you should maybe work a little on the flow
April 6th, 2007 at 03:26pm
Legomannj
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Thank you Lina=)
February 28th, 2007 at 08:28pm
Lykwoah
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It's awesome=]
I think it might be about a murder or something, maybe a man who killed his girlfriend...
=]
February 28th, 2007 at 08:24pm
Dilt
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I like it=)
Maybe it should be a little less complicated to understand what's the 'message' in it though=)
February 28th, 2007 at 04:12pm
Legomannj
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[quote="Mrs_kickass_Greenday"]wow this is really awesome![/quote]
Thank you :)
February 27th, 2007 at 10:49pm
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wow this is really awesome!
February 27th, 2007 at 09:51pm
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at least that I've read so far
However, you should maybe work a little on the flow