For a Girl in the Attic - Comments

Awww this was wonderful =)

This was really different, in an amazing way of course. There is no particular scheme here, yet still has a flowy aspect to it and is able to give the message clearly.
I enjoyed reading this very much; I'm very glad to know that you can give a different taste to poetry. :-)

wow.
short, yet powerful.
not complicated, nor simple.
perfect !

xoxox

I love the rise and fall, especially since it ended with a quick, sharp stop. :)

thats reallllllllly gooood.

This is really good. Thank you for writing it and actually posting it here.

awesome. is it written about anyone in particular? xD

[i]Amazing.[/i] I love the simplicity of it and how each line rhymes.
Definitely the best poem I've read in a while.

love love the last line. this paints a clear picture in my bed.
the only poems I ever read were by shel silverstein.
i like yours and i like it a lot.

this is great. there's so much feelings in it. :)

That's beautiful.