July 16th, 2010 at 04:39pm
This was brilliant, though I feel like I'm repeating myself with that word.
Your last line, "but the happiest man in the world is colorblind" was excellent and finished the poem so well.
For me, this poem meant forgetting about differences and what those can turn into. True happiness lies with those who are oblivious to those factors.
Haha, or you could be talking about something completely different. But that's the thing with poetry, not even the author may have a solid message hidden.
Good job. :-)
your poems sound so..
well they're just so much more powerful than anything I could ever write.