Don't you see, Daddy? - Comments

I fear there will be many a parent asking lots of forgiveness and having to answer for so many pains they have caused, or brought upon their innocent children. Well written. May it be my prayer, that this familial cycle end with you.

Ooh, this is a great poem! I like it. Very well-written. :)

I would call it beautiful but that's not the right word, Its powerful and deep, you have a way of putting emotion in black and white, and that is beautiful.

I have the same situation as you, sorry you have to go thru it:(

Wow this is just really really good. I have like da same situation cept my daddy did crack i can sooo relate to this <3 this

That's a very very good poem. I don't know if saying I enjoyed it would be the right words, but it was very deep and VERY very good.

WOW, i like this, this is brimming with emotion, Awesome work!!! Will youcheck out some of mine?

Thats Heartbreaking, i want to come find you and hug you, i'm litrally nearly crying :'(