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  • CCisamazing12345

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    This is pretty good! I like the rhyming :)
    January 7th, 2011 at 12:59am
  • lol4ever n always

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    i like the rhyme
    nice
    August 11th, 2010 at 01:22am
  • Ave.Maria.

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    Although quite short I like the flow and rhyme in this poem. Mentioning the sounds of the chairs and the chalk dust in the air really gives me a fell and reminds me of going back to school. I like this :)
    July 30th, 2010 at 03:26pm