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Wow...this is incredible. It reminds me of something Green Day would write back when they made the American Idiot album. This is fantastic. Perfect.

Makes me want to fight for what is right. This is pure genius. Usually, if I read a poem about empowering yourself and standing up for what you want and believe, I just brush it off. THIS, makes me want to do something. This makes me think.

I felt like this was a chant- a call to action. It reminded me of 1984 and V for Vendetta themed stories, which, coincidentally, are my favorite. I'm not usually one for a lot of abstract bolding and italics, but for this poem, I felt like it lent a lot to the meaning.

Oh, this was well done (as most of yours are).
I`m wondering where you get your inspiration, because thes things are left unsaid usually (:

I love this so much. xD
I love angry poems, and poems about things like this. They're the best.
It's beautiful, like everything else you write <3

Wow, that was really amazing.
Love the angry in this. And I agree Power to the people!
Amazing poem :)

I like this one :)
For some odd reason ... I could imagine you in rockband screaming out this poem through the mic xD

This is truely amazing...

I honestly don't see where people are getting "juvenile." Personally, I think "second-class fucking citizen" worked perfectly. It was angry, but rightfully so. It only added to the flow of the poem. It didn't take away from it at all. Maybe people are just too sensitive...

Awesome poem. Again, a topic that I never really expected to see in poem form! I love your writing style. :)

That was...powerful. In a sense that says 'you cannot squash me, for I will bear a hole in the sole soles of your shoes.' It's...awesome! I can't explain it any more than that. It's...inspiring. <3 Well done.

And now to the next one!

I really did like this. Your emotion comes through freely and the only thing I think wasn't really necessary was using the word "fucking" because honestly, it's an angry poem, but it's not a juvenile, uneducated one.

My god! Can you please give me some of you immense talent! o.O
I got chills from this! The emphasis on some of the words really made the poem that much stronger and solidified the way you felt while writing this. Bravo! <3

You go and tell them!!! Woo!! :) this would make a good speech

This was utterly amazing.
It flowed perfectly, and I can relate to it.
You m'dear have an act for writing poems.

:}

This was brilliant.

[i]
I will FIGHT
And those who stand with me in the name of equality
Will fight as only love can.[/i]

POWER TO THE PEOPLE, WOMAN !
Seriously, I loved it.
It seemed like you were giving a strong opinion/point and it came across well.
Excellent. :D

v I think it's flows amazingly, and the cuss word makes that line even better.

Cursing never looks good in a poem, even if it is a political debate with a friend
I think the poem could have a better flow
Otherwise you have the right idea