I'm Ready - Comments

awww, I this is adorable.
just a typo I think: second stanza last line should be "life wasn't where it was supposed to be"
but still adorable :)

June 5th, 2012 at 06:29am

This is beautiful. I really like your wording but you need some more full stops or the poem becomes long winded, other than that, it's fantastic.

January 7th, 2011 at 12:44pm

i like this. A LOT! reminds me of the phone call. :)

August 22nd, 2010 at 02:41pm

aww. thanks. (:

August 9th, 2010 at 11:33am

Aww. I like this a bunch.

August 8th, 2010 at 05:52am