Hmm.... I like this poem, but I feel like you should write more, so we have more idea of what she is going through. I mean, in your poem Numb, I never did find out why she has those sores, but you didn't need to tell that because you could tell what she was feeling was incredibly painful. This poem I don't feel as much, but might if you continued though.
February 15th, 2011 at 07:39pm