The Heartbrokens - Comments

so deep!! The words u used, i like.

I like it. your feeling got across in the poem and not a lot of people can do that.

Beautiful. Good concept.

good poem you really get your emotions across :)

Hmmm, It's good, sorry that I can't give you more than that, but the line breaks fit perfectly with the poem. Poems have a deeper meaning and reading it more than once is a good way to understand a poem and what the author is feeling, sorry rambling.

i love it
i wish i could write like that!!!