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  • vfgfgjhgfdsfds

    vfgfgjhgfdsfds (100)

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    umm so i usually don't like poems i find on here.. but this was exceptional... :| really. it was beautiful. there is just one thing, on one of the top lines you said "of" instead of "off" :)
    August 11th, 2010 at 08:49pm
  • singmetosleep03

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    wow this is really good
    August 11th, 2010 at 08:30pm
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