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  • MORANG

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    I really like this, when i saw the title i was not expecting anthing this deep, but what do you know?
    I love how you used the clams,
    Great poem, definatally keep writing them
    March 8th, 2011 at 12:47am
  • Ariveria

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    This is a great poem! It rings true... Though, just a suggestion, if you want to reply to commenters, don't do it here, or they'll never know. Use their profiles. :)
    August 17th, 2010 at 08:35am
  • Julie Black

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    lol yah titles are one of my favorite things about poems. They have to draw you in. So I'm glad you liked this one! Thanks!
    August 17th, 2010 at 07:52am
  • courier six

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    The title made me giggle but, gah, this was so, deep.
    It's really really awesome. I love how you personified the clam.
    Beautiful <3
    August 17th, 2010 at 07:47am
  • Julie Black

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    Thank you :]
    August 17th, 2010 at 07:41am
  • Valley Of Dreams

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    Awh, this poem is beautiful <3
    i want to be a clam now.
    you're very talented :D
    August 17th, 2010 at 07:31am
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