What if we were clams? - Comments

I really like this, when i saw the title i was not expecting anthing this deep, but what do you know?
I love how you used the clams,
Great poem, definatally keep writing them

This is a great poem! It rings true... Though, just a suggestion, if you want to reply to commenters, don't do it here, or they'll never know. Use their profiles. :)

lol yah titles are one of my favorite things about poems. They have to draw you in. So I'm glad you liked this one! Thanks!

The title made me giggle but, gah, this was so, deep.
It's really really awesome. I love how you personified the clam.
Beautiful <3

Thank you :]

Awh, this poem is beautiful <3
i want to be a clam now.
you're very talented :D