I am judging for the contest :D This is a nice poem. It flows pretty good and the rhyme is good too. It's kind of short but that's okay, cos it seems like it'd be better short than long. It's pretty powerful, and I love the way you use your words. Well done :)
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If you would like to know what points you got, please message me and I'll tell you :) Check into the contest to see who won soon!