Burn Me - Comments

The-Roman-D (100)

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I love

November 24th, 2010 at 07:57pm

joyfuljesse12 (100)

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This was absolutely beatiful, the way it flowed and rhymed, and the way you worded the stanza's just made everything pop, stand out, and have more meaning. I absolutely loved this

August 24th, 2010 at 07:42pm

Nuclear Muse (100)

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You did a great job rhyming, and the flow is amazing. It's very fast paced and you finish it very quickly, but the words still hold enough power to make you feel something. It also had a strong ending. Great! :)

August 24th, 2010 at 06:57am

just hollow birds (100)

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Wow.
Just.
Wow.
Very strong and powerful. I like third verse especially. Exceptional job well done =)

August 24th, 2010 at 05:57am