Tomorrow - Comments

i'd love to hear this with music!
you're amazing at writing songs!
you should keep it up!!

This is a really great song. I'm not often into song lyrics or poetry, but this is really great. It's really amazing how it has an element of sadness to it, but at the same time it seems very hopeful. I would love to hear this to music.

Beautiful. I love the conflicting weakness and inner strength, the darkness and the undertones of hope. You've turned what can easily become a very awkward contrast into something spectacular! You've worded everything beautifully, and describing the way you did made it all just that much better!
Awesome job!

Wow. The way it was worded, the concept... Beautiful.

This reminds me of my best friend.

I love this. <3

I won't lie, I don't read poems much on here because most of them are just poop. But this was not poop. This was very good. Very good nonpoop. XD

Ooh I really like this. The only thing is it took me the whole poem/song to figure out the line "What stories her scares told," I think you mean [i]scars[/i] not [i]scares[/i]. Really great job on this, I love it :)

Okay, I really like how even though the whole thing has a dark tone, it still somehow manages to be hopeful.
This was gorgeous.

This song is f*cking amazing, man!
You're such an amazing song writer.
It's so full of emotion and I can see that you really wrote it from the heart.
Well done. <3

This will be the first poem I've commented on, but that's irrelevant.

This was really beautiful, and full of emotion. Which after all, a song needs. This was really nice. Great Job. :3

Beautifully written! I loved it. I want to hear this with music. =]

Tomorrow is indeed another day.
Beautifully written and nice flow of the words.

I liked it.
You made this?

Beautiful. I am a whore for this song breh

i like it :)