Grief - Comments

This is amazing. I know exactly what you're talking about, and Rae's right: you can literally feel it when you're reading.
It's really outstanding.. and it hit me close.. I know what that feels like, without reading this.

Ya know those poems when the words are sounds?
Well in this one you can feel the words hurting your chest/heart. It's amazingly well done, and I love all the work you put into it.
The details are amazing, but I love how you can actually feel the poem as you read it.