Overdose - Comments

this is....genius.

just the way you worded everything, and all the emotion , it was so amazing. It seems like it could almost be a song, I can actually hear it as a song. It was perfect. I don't even know what else to say, your amazing.

amazing<3

This one is fantastic!
I just don't even know what to say aside from I love it. xD
It's so true.

This poem sounds so familiar to another poem I read......Hm...I'll figure that out later. Anyways I like this one, one because it rhymed and two because it in a way tell you some of the things people face in life. It sounded so realistic to me.

I am in love with this poem. It was amazing. You're very talented

Only one word to say: Wow... and so true.
Ok, that's four words...lol

O_O
Ohemgee, yes.

I can't say much about this 'cos it's, um, [perfect] great. :D
This needs to be on MTV, or something. >.>

Whoa. Just.... whoa.
That's so amazing. It's really hard to find good poetry on Mibba, and this made my favorites a line in.
MTV, huh?

Very well written. Good concept, too. I never thought I'd see this particular topic in a poem!

But to answer the question in your journal post (don't worry. I'm not stalking you!), the profanity did fit perfectly. It wasn't just a random swear word. It was a real part of the poem. That takes skill!

This was... pretty brilliant. You took an idea that's talked about a lot and made into something much more intriguing. I really adore the way this was written. You have quite some talent.