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  • intoxicated love

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    this is....genius.

    just the way you worded everything, and all the emotion , it was so amazing. It seems like it could almost be a song, I can actually hear it as a song. It was perfect. I don't even know what else to say, your amazing.

    amazing<3
    April 22nd, 2011 at 07:20pm
  • symphon1c

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    This one is fantastic!
    I just don't even know what to say aside from I love it. xD
    It's so true.
    October 12th, 2010 at 09:06pm
  • Ashuri Chan

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    This poem sounds so familiar to another poem I read......Hm...I'll figure that out later. Anyways I like this one, one because it rhymed and two because it in a way tell you some of the things people face in life. It sounded so realistic to me.
    October 11th, 2010 at 09:20am
  • SKQueen

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    I am in love with this poem. It was amazing. You're very talented
    October 9th, 2010 at 11:47am
  • RunningOnRhymes

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    Only one word to say: Wow... and so true.
    Ok, that's four words...lol
    October 7th, 2010 at 07:53pm
  • SNOOKI WAS HERE.

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    O_O
    Ohemgee, yes.

    I can't say much about this 'cos it's, um, [perfect] great. :D
    This needs to be on MTV, or something. >.>
    September 17th, 2010 at 05:36am
  • stencil heart.

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    Whoa. Just.... whoa.
    That's so amazing. It's really hard to find good poetry on Mibba, and this made my favorites a line in.
    MTV, huh?
    September 13th, 2010 at 04:04am
  • AnneAlysse

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    Very well written. Good concept, too. I never thought I'd see this particular topic in a poem!

    But to answer the question in your journal post (don't worry. I'm not stalking you!), the profanity did fit perfectly. It wasn't just a random swear word. It was a real part of the poem. That takes skill!
    September 9th, 2010 at 07:46am
  • Jimmy Novak

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    This was... pretty brilliant. You took an idea that's talked about a lot and made into something much more intriguing. I really adore the way this was written. You have quite some talent.
    September 9th, 2010 at 07:39am