Love To Hate You - Comments

  • Patty Lovell

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    I love the love/hate theme thing to this. It's really cool. I think it's a little too repetitive, even though I know that was your goal. But still.

    See, that's the only critisizm I can give you since everything else is amazing xD
    October 16th, 2010 at 06:53am
  • tholomew plague.

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    I really like this.
    I think that a lot of people can probably relate to it.
    It's actually quite beautiful.
    I love the way it was written.
    October 11th, 2010 at 07:32pm
  • a pretty flower.

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    [i]Your love has me has as a drug, your hate is my drug.[/i]

    That line personally I thought was just perfect, [b]outstanding[/b], and oringinal.
    How you just put the love one thing and the hate the opposite made me understand it well.
    Great poem [:
    October 11th, 2010 at 02:35am
  • house potter

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    [i]Darling I just want to say I love to hate you[/i]

    That was a beautiful line.

    I agree with Dr. and AmorarEsDeVivir. It seems like you have contrasting feelings for someone you like. I know first hand how that feels. I really liked how each sentence went from love to hate. I think it really shows exactly the confused feelings you have. Very intriguing. :)
    October 10th, 2010 at 07:03am
  • AmorarEsDeVivir

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    I like the contrast here, and the relationship between love and hate towards the person. I don't now if I'm interpreting this right, but to me it seems like...kind of this odd sort of attraction that you don't want to have, if that makes sense. A scenario where you want to stay distant and can't.
    October 10th, 2010 at 06:13am
  • Dr.

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    It sort of seems like you're describing a forbidden love. Like...you actually want someone who isn't a jackass that just wants to touch and sex you all the time. This is a very powerful poem, which is able to state emotions in the most blatant state. Very well done!
    October 10th, 2010 at 06:11am
  • rebelinstall

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    I love it <3
    Its how I feel about somebody :x
    September 15th, 2010 at 01:56am