[i]Your love has me has as a drug, your hate is my drug.[/i]
That line personally I thought was just perfect, [b]outstanding[/b], and oringinal.
How you just put the love one thing and the hate the opposite made me understand it well.
Great poem [:
[i]Darling I just want to say I love to hate you[/i]
That was a beautiful line.
I agree with Dr. and AmorarEsDeVivir. It seems like you have contrasting feelings for someone you like. I know first hand how that feels. I really liked how each sentence went from love to hate. I think it really shows exactly the confused feelings you have. Very intriguing. :)
I like the contrast here, and the relationship between love and hate towards the person. I don't now if I'm interpreting this right, but to me it seems like...kind of this odd sort of attraction that you don't want to have, if that makes sense. A scenario where you want to stay distant and can't.
It sort of seems like you're describing a forbidden love. Like...you actually want someone who isn't a jackass that just wants to touch and sex you all the time. This is a very powerful poem, which is able to state emotions in the most blatant state. Very well done!
See, that's the only critisizm I can give you since everything else is amazing xD