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  • Sheepy

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    :tehe:
    It's nice to see someone else is findig it so hard to articulate a comment.
    And then Erin makes the rest of us look bad by being able to do so. :grr:

    Does this entire thing rhyme? It almost seems to do so, which is a feat in itself, because it doesn't seem like the forced kind of rhyme you tend to get. The flow is spot-on.

    HailHailHail

    And yeah, everything Erin and Katie said. :coffee:
    May 4th, 2008 at 03:02am
  • Pikachu

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    That.was.freaking.amazing.
    o-o
    I don't know what to comment abot it.
    Except that its beyondawesomesofreakingawesome.
    The structure is amazing and gah. I can't talk. D:
    <3333
    January 14th, 2008 at 08:52pm
  • tripper

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    wow! U r really great! I think mine are 100 times worse cause I suck at poetry
    January 12th, 2008 at 12:15am
  • skank.

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    O_O

    holy hell.
    That. is. amazing.
    Seriously.

    Its extremely powerful.
    Im not usually one for poetry,
    but I can definitely say Im moved by this.

    Talent gets people far,
    and I have no doubt you will go far.

    This is just, woah.
    -has run out of words-
    January 12th, 2008 at 12:00am
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