I relly like this poem , i like how u used the spaceing, this is relly well done x
May 10th, 2011 at 09:00pm
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Oh wow, I love this. The way I read it, I kind of see it as emotional restraints described in more physical imagery and it makes it very powerful.April 12th, 2011 at 05:13am
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the last 2 paragraphs are the best,well done great poemSeptember 15th, 2010 at 04:43pm
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This makes me think about certain people I know, good poem, excellent flow. Keep writing =DSeptember 15th, 2010 at 02:46pm
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Outstanding wording madamSeptember 15th, 2010 at 07:05am
