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  • Rorzshach

    Rorzshach (100)

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    Its Queen's park lol the woman!

    lol xx
    September 20th, 2010 at 07:03pm
  • rockinrose

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    I want to eat you!! :3 Beautiful, beautiful poem. :) You're my wife for a reason. :P
    Wait.. If I live with you.. (erases-thought-from-head) Sorry.. dirtyness.

    Anyway back to the poem. It was so.. touching. It fits perfectly? (wth am i saying?) TOUCHING. LOL. IT WAS TOUCHING. sorry.. just realized. :P

    The descriptive imagery was highly.. descriptive. Straightforward and put into a repeating parameter. Just brillaint. :) (I'd get an F if I described one of the pre 1914 poems like that) yeah.. so I'm totally gonna do something with one of your poems. Its a surprise.. so.. eat yourself. :) xxx KEEP IT UP!! :)
    September 19th, 2010 at 10:33pm
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