Help Me See Life - Comments

This is really cute. =) Kind of that "All You Need Is Love" vibe. I like how you set the scene here with description of the scenery before moving into the emotion, and then how you tied the emotion and the scenery together.

Aw, it's sweet! It's like...fuck, it's cold outside, and we're broke, and there's not heat, and the gas is fucked, but FUCK it. We're just going to sit here and cuddle because we've got no money and we fucking can. Yes sir.

I liked it a lot. You're really good at poetry/songwriting. I liked the rhyming.

luv it

Aw wow dude! This poem rocked!
Sorry, the comment didn't really go with the... Uhm atmosphere of the poem but it was really really really brilliant!

Stupid links to other pictures not working!!... I'll put them later Im lazy lol

V Just a feeling of what I feel right now... if season could be emotions I say I feel like winters first frost.

I'm not sure what to say to this except when we feel this way, to just breathe and wrap up in a warm blanket on your bed. Just wait for it to pass because someone might not come. We have to be our own comfort. There aren't enough gaudian angels in this world and the ones that are here are drowning.