A shattered heart's melody - Comments

I really love this one, it's very beautiful and descriptive.

sigh i had a person who i loved died and its so true :(

Wow. I'm too lazy to comment on all your work xD So I decided I'd comment on my favourite, which is this :)

great poem I'm aware I'm late to comment but comments are great :)

in a good way! kindof..? but yeah, i can deff relate to this.
it's a really good poem! [[: the end was the best. i'll tell you my favorite part since you always do that fer mine:
" 'It wasn't supposed to be that way'
I cry out and look up at this heartless sky
The stars that froze from your betrayal
'You promised me love' I whisper to them
'You lied' " that part is beast. C:

Wow, you're a really good poet. I love the emotions you put into the verses and the repetition of "I lie and sing". you should write more! :D

I love this!!! its gorgeous, you did a fantastic job on this, i think this is my favorite one of your poems. My favorite part (well i had many lol) was my hopes now a pile of ashes, my heart gone, but i keep holding on i lie and sing I lie and sing. oh and the part that says it wasn't supposed to be that way, i cry out and look up at this heartless sky the stars that froze from your betrayal "you promised me love" i whisper to them "you lied"

Absolutely amazing. :) You have a very good gift, Hara. Keep up the amazing work.

:'( wow... Amazing job. Hearbreakingly true. Beautifully written.I agree with Xion12 "If only I could write as well as you"... oh well you are an amazing writer. Keep up the good work.

Really pretty...heartbreakingly so.

That was beautiful....sigh only if I could write as good as you.