Isn't It Funny? - Comments

I really liked this. It's chilling, has good imagery, and I liked the repetition.
I also liked the last line.

Dude, I [i]love[/i] the tone you wrote this with. It's so...nonesically chilling.
And your imagery is just...beautiful.

Wow..that was amazing.
Favorite line [i]Hysteria never felt so good[/i]
Amazing poem :)

This is so insane, and mad, like those below are saying. It's very nice and just ohmygracious brilliant.<3

I found nothing wrong or anything I'd changed. Perfect-o. <3

[i]Hysteria never felt so good.[/i]
The slight edge of insanity to it is amazing. This tells a story, a really good story.
[i]Crawling towards the falling sun[/i] That was my favorite line. It's... so amazing.
[i]This is what you asked for.[/i] I like that. It sounds like a wish gone wrong, I think it's perfect.

I really liked this. Its got that edge of insanity to it.