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  • XxSuicideQueenXx

    XxSuicideQueenXx (100)

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    It's really good I kinda agrea with FallingGracefully to
    October 4th, 2010 at 08:14pm
  • FallingGracefully

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    I really like this. The first, second, and last stanza's flow nicely. But for some reason the third and fourth stanza's seem off beat, idk maybe it's just me. This is still a great poem. ♥
    September 29th, 2010 at 06:29am
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