i spelt skies like that on purpose. the poem is about her eyes. and when i copy pasted that poem from my notepad the formatting got flubbed and i didn't bother changing it. ;)
October 6th, 2010 at 04:40am
I really like this poem. My ocd is bugging me though.
* Skies not Skeyes
* Space between No.Never so that it's No. Never
Otherwise it's perfect. Good rhyme, good flow, and wonderful imagery. Please excuse the up-tight spelling/grammar Nazi moment.