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This is really wonderfullyou should give it to him if i were you i would to. Hes going to love it no matter what :)

This is beautiful. :) Very descriptive and lovely. And I think you are very good at love poems. :) The poem lies! But it's an awesome poem..so it's ok. :D

This is a very beautiful poem, I love the comparisons and such, it's very elegantly written.
And I can very easily relate to it c:
I wish I could write a poem like this for my girlfriend. xD

Wow that was really good, I'm lost for words.
Amazing poem :)

Oooo, I likes this one a lot! It's so romantic and very well detailed. And great use of similes.....it is similes that use comparasions with the words like or as right?

This is the best poem I've read in a long time. You've got to think about publishing like a poetry book or something...because there is absolutely nothing wrong with your poems. They move me.

Oh my.
I thought this was rather lovely.
I'd go on a whole rant about how lovely I think it is... but I think you get the message.
Great job.

[i]And I stumble and fumble for words
To tell you what you mean to me[/i]
Brilliant line. Simply golden.
This wasn't cliche (thank god) or I would have thrown up. And it's not too sappy, either, it's just right.
It sounds simply wonderful when I'm muttering the lines to myself at nearly midnight.
I'd say for a first-time love poem, this is really good. I'm looking forward to more.