Lost - Comments

  • bunny20

    bunny20 (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    This is really wonderfullyou should give it to him if i were you i would to. Hes going to love it no matter what :)
    May 8th, 2011 at 08:35am
  • Lovely Luna Lovegood

    Lovely Luna Lovegood (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    This is beautiful. :) Very descriptive and lovely. And I think you are very good at love poems. :) The poem lies! But it's an awesome poem..so it's ok. :D
    October 27th, 2010 at 01:25am
  • symphon1c

    symphon1c (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    This is a very beautiful poem, I love the comparisons and such, it's very elegantly written.
    And I can very easily relate to it c:
    I wish I could write a poem like this for my girlfriend. xD
    October 12th, 2010 at 09:11pm
  • Fantasy Monroe

    Fantasy Monroe (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    32
    Location:
    United States
    Wow that was really good, I'm lost for words.
    Amazing poem :)
    October 11th, 2010 at 07:46pm
  • Ashuri Chan

    Ashuri Chan (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    32
    Location:
    United States
    Oooo, I likes this one a lot! It's so romantic and very well detailed. And great use of similes.....it is similes that use comparasions with the words like or as right?
    October 11th, 2010 at 09:09am
  • Dr.

    Dr. (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United States
    This is the best poem I've read in a long time. You've got to think about publishing like a poetry book or something...because there is absolutely nothing wrong with your poems. They move me.
    October 10th, 2010 at 07:20am
  • roux.

    roux. (105)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    32
    Location:
    Fiji
    Oh my.
    I thought this was rather lovely.
    I'd go on a whole rant about how lovely I think it is... but I think you get the message.
    Great job.
    October 9th, 2010 at 09:00am
  • stencil heart.

    stencil heart. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    United States
    [i]And I stumble and fumble for words
    To tell you what you mean to me[/i]
    Brilliant line. Simply golden.
    This wasn't cliche (thank god) or I would have thrown up. And it's not too sappy, either, it's just right.
    It sounds simply wonderful when I'm muttering the lines to myself at nearly midnight.
    I'd say for a first-time love poem, this is really good. I'm looking forward to more.
    October 9th, 2010 at 08:31am