A New Smile - Comments

I must admit, I had tears at the end of this poem. It was that good. I think that a lot of people can relate to this, whether through a friend or just themselves. And it's written so perfectly that I got just so involved, reading it. You did a really great job with this. Keep up the superb writing!

wow its dark but sooooooo good
great job

Definitely darker than I usually write, but I more than enjoyed it. It has depth, and you seem to have a natural rhythm... just reads well, like one continuous thought. or something. dark, sophisticated writing nonetheless... cheers, => Jess

This is amazing.
i really like how you wrote it, <33

That was awsome. It just sounds good. And it isn't overly sad or depressing so that's also a plus

this...is....amazing!!!!
i am officially madly i love with you and your talent.
<3333

It was great! Lots of voice and I could totally connect. I have a friend who's going thru the drinking and cutting thing...I'm going to have him read this poem!

Great job!
-Alexi

wow! thats all i can say wow! its really good.