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  • Vulpes Vulpes

    Vulpes Vulpes (160)

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    Very powerful, that last lines in the second and third stanzas especially.
    I love the language used, it's so descriptive, I liked the line "it's deadly tango" I thought that was really clever.

    Great job!
    October 14th, 2010 at 09:36pm
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