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  • WTFMusicPerson

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    I like this a lot and I adore the rhyme scheme
    October 18th, 2010 at 07:39pm
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    i have felt this way so many times you did a really really good job i love it!
    October 18th, 2010 at 07:25pm
  • Eimie

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    I really like it! It's so real good job
    October 18th, 2010 at 03:01pm
  • DeleteMe12

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    It's fantastic!
    It all flows really well, and I can relate to it. Also, you can feel the desperation (or manybe that isn't the words I want... need?) in it.
    Great job :)
    October 18th, 2010 at 12:25pm
  • Mrs.Katsumi.Grinch

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    I can feel the emotion coming from this its very touching, and relatable I think you did a great job
    October 18th, 2010 at 10:54am
  • volta.

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    [i]well[/i] = [i]we'll[/i]. :]
    I really like it. And I haven't got much else to say, because I think you've used a decent amount of punctuation, and there are no other errors. :]

    Naw, I like the topic, and the story. :] It's really good, and how the title plays a huge part in it. :]
    October 18th, 2010 at 10:26am