My Mask - Comments

  • sponge616

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    =( i love it! its weird 'cause i don't usually like poems... but this one i feel in love with *hugs*
    January 19th, 2008 at 12:25am
  • Lightning Zap

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    I'm not skilled in poetry, but I think it's good.
    Though I did find one spelling error... nothing serious...

    "A place to hid"
    should it be hide rather than hid?

    But yeah, as I said, I'm no poetry expert and I think it's very good!
    January 18th, 2008 at 04:29am
  • karenlee

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    So you will know you are not alone out there, get help!
    January 17th, 2008 at 04:08am