January 6th, 2012 at 07:27pm
[i]The most fragile sheets of rust;[/i]
This, right here, is the line that snagged me in; and so quickly too! I am quite picky with poetry, I find a lot of times people try too hard and the flow of it gets sour and skewed but this... this is utterly divine! It reminds me of my backyard [which is a cemetery] in the autumn. So calming amidst the lifelessness of both the cemetery and the autumn world around me. I am in awe. Truly. Thank you for directing me here. :-)
Lots of pine trees though.
I should stop being surprised that you write amazing poetry :)