I actually loved this poem! Personally, I prefer rhymed poems than any other kind. You did a great job on this with the rhyming, but I thought the structure was kind of everywhere, if you know what I mean; like, some words should've been in the same line as other words. But I can see that this was very well thought of and I enjoyed reading it. Well done! :)
December 26th, 2010 at 02:22pm