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i like it
January 18th, 2008 at 12:10am
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I like the rhyming pattern you got going. You not only managed that, but achieved to tell what the poem is about without going overboard and drowning.
Great job x]
January 17th, 2008 at 11:27pm
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wow thats really good
and understand able....
good job.
January 17th, 2008 at 07:36pm
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