Self Mutilation and Pain - Comments

  • Ren_rum

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    I write dark stuff all my poems are like this
    November 9th, 2010 at 01:51pm
  • CoOoCoOoCajoOo

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    ...and as a disclaimer: that's just my personal reaction.
    November 9th, 2010 at 01:40am
  • CoOoCoOoCajoOo

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    I believe there to be a limit of depressing literature one can take. You have managed to reach that limit in one poem. I was cringing by the end. Of course authors are not obligated to be cheery, nor do they owe us even one sentence that makes us smile; but this is an example of a poet taking that liberty a little too far.
    November 9th, 2010 at 01:39am