Dreamless Night - Comments

  • Desperate Dreamer

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    Wonderful, I love the juxtaposition (English word!). I like soccer_poet's suggestion for the title.
    November 15th, 2010 at 07:30am
  • soccer_poet

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    Very good!
    Maybe a "Dreamless Night", idk.
    All i know is that it was good.
    November 14th, 2010 at 04:06am
  • FallingGracefully

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    Maybe "Winding Dreams" idk. This is a wonderful poem. I love the last stanza. Great job♥
    November 14th, 2010 at 03:10am