Pulling Me Apart - Comments

  • second-hand smoke

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    I love this poem! You describe the conflicting emotions...the war inside your head...so perfectly. I can totally relate, but I don't think I could ever write something as powerful as this.
    January 4th, 2011 at 12:22am
  • r.tistique

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    I love the conflicting feelings in this poem! I'm working on one with a similar topic and I absolutely love this...haha don't know how I can compete xD
    December 3rd, 2010 at 01:48am
  • Marcey

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    apparently you already know all the best qualities in this poem, and that people will love it as soon as they read it.
    you have a brilliant tallent, keep it shinning
    December 1st, 2010 at 05:59pm
  • Ave.Maria.

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    "You’re the love of my life
    The thorn in my side
    The reason I get up in the morning
    The reason I can’t sleep at night" - I love this so much. You describe the conflicting feelings so well, this poem is really relatable.
    November 25th, 2010 at 07:38pm
  • Look.Alive.Sunshine

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    This is one of the best things I have read in while....and I read alot. C:
    November 25th, 2010 at 05:18pm
  • HelpI'mAlive

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    I love the flow of this
    and it's something I can really relate to.
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    Good job.
    November 24th, 2010 at 08:46pm
  • max31

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    its an amazing poem i really liked it
    November 23rd, 2010 at 07:16am
  • Theory of a Goblin;

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    Oh my god! That's so amazing! <33
    You deserve a cookie! ^-^
    November 23rd, 2010 at 03:39am
  • Sarah_Smile4Me

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    Very good!:)
    November 22nd, 2010 at 05:43am
  • Agliophobia

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    Awwh :) That was sweet. I have someone who poped in my head as I read this ♥
    November 22nd, 2010 at 04:45am
  • sticky

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    ive felt this way you did a really great job:)
    November 22nd, 2010 at 04:44am