I like this a lot, like Korfi said it has a nice flow. The first rhyme (home/phone) threw me off a little because I wasn't sure it was a rhyming poem. But all in all it's good. :)
I like this. I think you could use a stronger title, though. It has a really good flow, but when you get to the fourth line from the bottom, the rythm gets a little off. Maybe edit and resumbit? Good work!