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  • AcceleratingSpeeds.

    AcceleratingSpeeds. (100)

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    This has changed my life
    December 14th, 2010 at 05:11am
  • hey mr rager

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    I like how you showed the character's vulnerability in the poem. Readers can really relate to that. well written. cheers!
    November 25th, 2010 at 08:49am
  • Diiggeehh

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    i love it Kai. :D
    November 25th, 2010 at 06:28am
  • Love_Terra

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    This poem is Amazing<3
    November 25th, 2010 at 05:37am
  • DntdWriter

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    This is a great example of how love can be so great yet so hurtful at the same time. Thanks for writing this it uses good emotions.
    November 25th, 2010 at 05:35am
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