I Lied - Comments

This is such a good poem, it really drew me in and, just wow <3 =]

So finally you titled this poem because i think i love this poem more than i love beige. The 'I's and stuff is just awesomesauce. im jealous

This is a beautiful poem! The solitary 'I's really make an impact, and your imagery is fantastic - the first verse in particularly really draws the reader in. You really do have a talent with painting pictures with words!

Woe, this poem really deserves more comments, with the very verse you had me captured: " I
Is a solitary stroke
Breaking the white expanse
of a sheet of paper" - this is truly beautiful.
This is a really unique and creative poem. I love how you isolate all your 'I's. This made for a really enjoyable read, I really like it. Though [i]in my opinion[/i] I think there could be a more suitable title, just lik 'I' for example, but thats just my opinion. But overall I really loved this
Of a sheet of paper