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second-hand smoke (150)

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wow, this is really good!
the concept, choice of words, rhyme scheme and rhythm are all spot on!
great work!
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December 22nd, 2010 at 04:23am
BuyMeCake (100)

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Awww
I love this!
It's so good!

December 1st, 2010 at 10:15am

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