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  • JollyJohanna

    JollyJohanna (100)

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    Thanks :)
    July 10th, 2011 at 09:05pm
  • wanderer23

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    I like it! You have a great voice.
    And the title is why I read it~ made me really happy :)
    June 3rd, 2011 at 08:28pm
  • JollyJohanna

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    Thank you :) You're absolutely right about the purpose of repetitiveness.
    December 5th, 2010 at 07:39pm
  • leaf's a buzzard

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    I rather like this. It is a bit repetitive, but I get the feeling that it's part of the point of the poem. Great job. :]
    December 3rd, 2010 at 11:33pm
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