That's really, really sad. It's nicely written, but... wow. Just... damn. Great job.
(And I like the incentive in the little summary thing. Probably just guaranteed yourself quite a few comments. ;D I swear, though, my comment is genuine, not purely for a returned comment.)
This is so hard to read. I had a best friend who always acted as if I were the troubled one, though I found all these horrable things about her and her family. Her being poor, raped. She's so strong. she moved across the country. I worry every day about her, and it's been years. I remember her being so jumpy and frightened when she had a call, or when it was time to go home. I have a sick feeling something happened.
Great poem, really.
im soo sorry about your friend. i wrote a poem, although fictional, about the same thing.its called The Monster. im glad shes in a better place :) (by the way i lyk your poem.lolZ)