December 26th, 2010 at 05:05pm
That was a piece of fantastic. I'm a sucker for quirky romances and I'm really impressed.
"Have you got a lunar house and a bed for three? Have you got a ballroom? I'm a great dancer." Those were lines of perfection.
I thought I was the only one who saw such huge appeal in scarecrows. Their so elegant and rural. And the moon- inspiration for so many poems, though mostly plays the part of metaphor "Dear your hair/eyes/smile are the moon, all shining and luminous."
Ingenious couple, divine wording. Poets like you remind me of why I stalk the poetry section of mibba desperately trying to find something worthwhile to read.
It's perfect. I can't think of any way to improve it.